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mickey
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PostSubject: unfinished   Mon 03 Nov 2008, 10:23 pm

...Subject: ... Today at 1:52 pm

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johny i hardly knew ya,
when them coppers came and slew ya,
i watched as them slugs burned threw ya,

it was winter in denver mid december remember,
during that blizzard the only time that i ever saw ya shiver ,
right after them slugs ate you for dinner and your blood ran to the river,

i thought you died stairing at the sky as i unloaded my fourtyfive,
the look in your eyes was pure pride as i held my aim high,
only you and I know why we had to die & leave this all behind,
the cops called it suicide but you and I know what blew through my mind,
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...still rusty but ill get back at this,


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PostSubject: Re: unfinished   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 3:10 am

I know you been in the Klink for a lil'...
Hadn't expected you to rhyme this loose, though. I'd have
thought you tightened your ish up after all these months... but, no biggie.
Just stick around and elevate, Fam...
No one here will reign the top for ever. And I'd think no one'll
stay grounded either... get into concepts and clever wordplays...

Flows usually not a prob for anyone...
but... tbh... and str8 forward...

I've seen you drop better than this in the past.
Stay Up, homie... Get down in this shit.

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PostSubject: ...   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 5:52 am

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PostSubject: Re: unfinished   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 6:07 pm

i didnt mind it, jus had to find the flow.. i woulda been nicer n a better read if it was longer..
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