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Mothafuckinlou
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PostSubject: quick short key   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 3:26 am

whos da best? Lou da Best? Choose the rest cuz lou 'bring cremation ta young broads' like Jewish tests
its the coolest quest to find lou undress wit ya girl 'Screamin Damn' this Fool Schoolin Sex
So U Can Move the rest, cuz 'Lou Like A King' U Onli Need Jewels N Breasts ta Fuel His Chest

See My Movement Is Quick, Improving My Hits, Wit A Toolsets N Clips But i 'throw up ya hands' like removement of grip
see lou prove im da shit, wit the cruelest of scripts, when I 'Open up ya job benefits' so 'Run At lou' N I Behoove you 2 quit

'Smush Out My Vocab' Like a Steam Roller, But This Is Just A Quick Keystyle, Ur Onli See 1 out of 1 million of my spit skill like a Lean Folder
Now I Seem Colder Aint It, My Mean Shoulder Dainted, and 'blow thru ya skull' leaving ya scene old n painted

its on some fighting word shit, which originited from a Mic n a jerk kid, that battle n won, despite on da worthless
diamonds n rubies bright like da circus, n i can hold em forever, like da height of my dirtlist

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and if you on that... i'd run n hide, cuz lou wit a gun ta find ya ass n ya son with pride
ya fun was tried, n ya hunny died, now ya done n fried, so 'victoriously' lou won it wide///

see this nonstop typing, cuz im at the top of my writing, forever wit words, all im droppin is lightening
so hop on da hype n stop all da fighting cuz lou will 'stick hard da the kin' like floppin on dikings

cops n those vikings, im halted is never, and my assault is better
so at fault at that matter, lou hold a vault wit a ladder, n the money falls of the ceiling like da salt on da badder (salted preztels)

Listen n weep, cuz ur missing this week, off lou' off the top 'Sickness' Like 'POrno Films' As He Fist N Cough A Freak
So Everyone See This, Audio Too, Ill Spill Out The Best Cuz Im Pissin Off a Peak//
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PostSubject: Re: quick short key   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 3:27 am

quick shit no stopping
feed this
straight of the top of my head...as if i was freestylin on audio
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PostSubject: Re: quick short key   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 8:17 pm

multies were good, same wit the concepts.. but flow was streched lik fuck.. try to shorten yer punchline line up.. so you keep yer flow..
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PostSubject: Re: quick short key   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 8:25 pm

seems like you got so much critique to everyones shit....
but at least ur feeding Smile
i wanna see u write tho
see if you can back up ur feeds, comments, n votes or r u talkin out ya ass
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PostSubject: Re: quick short key   Wed 05 Nov 2008, 12:51 am

lol im gonna co-sign both these statements....lou ya def. got them rhymes but it seems like ur just fitting em all in just to see how many you can get in there ya dig? i didnt see any "Oh shit!" punchlines lol but overall it was a decent piece....but i agree w/ MFL, Kain you are one annoying son of a bitch lol jp...ya'll play nice before i have to shut ya both up haha

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