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 east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]

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East Ren
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 100% [ 3 ]
Elementaltiy
0%
 0% [ 0 ]
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PostSubject: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Fri 07 Nov 2008, 3:13 am

2 Bars
ASAP
(if not done within 30 minutes from check in. Whoever posts 1st wins)

Check & G'Luck
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Fri 07 Nov 2008, 3:13 am

check, gdluck
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Fri 07 Nov 2008, 3:32 am

Piece-a Italian phony, loser in denial, I’m so far ahead, he can’t see me for miles
You’re dropping ONE BY ONE no homies left; this nigga has Dominoes on Speed Dial

(Piece-a italian phony = Dominoes //pizza)

Niggaz whack digging dee-rack, lookin like Big Black on Joey Crack all twirled n whirled
Pics of joy-riding 'Cam-L's back' all fat and curled is when this dudes ON TOP OF THE WORLD

(Dee-Rack = D Rack as in D cups for a bra)
(Cam-L's Back, Like Came L's = Camel Back)
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Fri 07 Nov 2008, 3:42 am

i dont need to rape his ass to hear this kid yell in shame over his stretched mentality
i just need to tape n blast to leave a "Big L" in his name harder then catchin reality//

reality hits hard
his pic has big l and there is a L in his name

so i'm frying his brain like "fresh meat" with my lines so cannibals can eat
prying his veins from his flesh defeated rhymes faster then animals in heat//
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Fri 07 Nov 2008, 3:43 am

iight nice lines man. Lets get some votes.
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PostSubject: ...my vote...   Fri 07 Nov 2008, 10:17 pm

Cats & short b/down`:

Opener: east Ren... that ass bit I'm not a fan of... but made relevance in the 1st line... punch was nice in the second.
Flow: east Ren... had smoother transition between lines and bars. Work on that, Element`.
Complexity: Element`... I needed the expos... and he had relevence in his plays, but did lose out on potency.
Creativity: E... in terms of mets, I was feelin' Element`s more. Not as mean as East's... but better conveyed.
Set ups: East Ren... E.. your 3rd line was really weak filler... try to work on this... you'll hit harder, and for more your verse's duration is potent.
Punches: East Ren.
Consistency: East Ren. nice form... good experience, apparently. Neutral You should hit up the tourney. Think abut it, at teast.
Wordplay: uhhh... I'ma say this one tied. Both could connect they plays better... imo.
Multies: Element`... I know east Ren had tighter ones - but E went for longer multies, and gets the vote here. Even though his were not filled out multies, he reached for complexity.
Vocab: east Ren... edged it over Element`enough to take the win in this.
Closer: east Ren... not the fire for a finisher, but the plays were better formulated... set up wasn't great... but last line was decent. Element`... I wasn't feelin' your closing line... personally... prolly could have been formulated a little dif~ for my vote on this.

MVGT = east renegade
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Fri 07 Nov 2008, 11:47 pm

thanks for the vote and break down man
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Fri 07 Nov 2008, 11:50 pm

0 - 1 East.

Thanks, good detailed vote.
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Sat 08 Nov 2008, 11:37 pm

Elementality

bar1:Iight Punch Felt multis coulda been more sound or in tact
bar2:again Bars decent but The structure of the rhyme scheme is a bit wild you know what i mean? but still i liked the multis.


East Renegade

bar1:Good bar personal punch but i thought you coulda hit the shit out of him if you worded it right lol still good bar

Bar2:Deceeent, the punch wasent really all amusing but the concept was cool.


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Opener:ER
flow:ER
Struc:Tie
Complexity:Ele
Creativity:Ele
Mutlis:ER
Punch:Ele
personals:ER
Vocab:ER
Closer:ER

Vote: East renegade

nice quick battle here
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Sun 09 Nov 2008, 12:15 am

thanks for vote and feedback, 2-0, uppin for more votes
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Sun 09 Nov 2008, 7:13 pm

uppin for votes
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Mon 10 Nov 2008, 1:19 am

kk.. imma put a vote in.. bin waitin for people to hit this qwik for votes.. but i guess theres not as much people round as i thot.. so here i am..

flow- Ren
punches- tie
multies- Ren
similies- neither
werdplay- El
nameplay- neither
structure- Ren
complexity- El
creativity- El
personals- neither
opener/closer- tie
vocab- tie
delivery- Ren

Ren GMV.. simply.. real close.. Ren edged it..
.. El you needa try not to put so much content in each line.. kills yer whole bar homie.
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Mon 10 Nov 2008, 1:22 am

thanks for the vote man
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Mon 10 Nov 2008, 9:30 pm

uppin to close this battle
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PostSubject: Re: east renegade vs Elementality [3-0 KO]   Mon 10 Nov 2008, 11:09 pm

Aiight... *closed*

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