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PostSubject: 3 bar speacial.   Sat 08 Nov 2008, 5:14 am



im the incarnation of a nation of poor faces,
total devastation is waitin better play your aces,

when retrobution turns to revolution who will you be persecutin,
ill be the first one shootin lootin boot scootin on vladimere putin,

its time to regroup bullett proof tha coups before they swoop,
poor boys put up your dukes all of congress is in cahoots,
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PostSubject: Re: 3 bar speacial.   Sat 08 Nov 2008, 6:03 am

Flow was nice... some new complexity in there, too.

Metas I was feelin', prolly could have yaken a lil' more time wording this rhyme...
but, overall it's a step up from your last couple.

Vocab is now getting attention as well as mutlies.
Good ish. Jus' keep workin' them rhymes, mick'...
SHit'll come out the more you init, feel me?

Anyway... nice lifts in certain areas.
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PostSubject: Re: 3 bar speacial.   Sat 08 Nov 2008, 11:58 pm

i think the biggest plus in this was the vocab. so props on that.. sum werds i dnt i totally understood.. but still nice none-the-less.. props.. i'd rather read sumthin lik this then .. multies based like wutt i write ... Sad
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PostSubject: Re: 3 bar speacial.   Fri 21 Nov 2008, 4:43 am

yea i like the vocab and the multi syllables
i dont know of what u talkin about though but none the less good shit
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