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PostSubject: Honestly.. i dnt know..   Sun 09 Nov 2008, 7:39 am

dnt know where this came from.. i was bored the other day.. opened up wordpad n just wrote.. so hola wit sum feed..

the conflict with sillestial beings has just occured,
its'a massacure N this earths giants r distubred,
with the reto-70s music as their theme song in crime,
the screams long n wine from the heathONS of time,
tattered n battered platoons of civilians in green,
skulls shattered n scattered all-over my shoulders n jeans,
its my best friend, i saw his birth-mark explode,
right before his blood cells devoured my skin N clothes,
its wimsical as murder n rage is on-point wit musicals,
just close yer eyes till the sunrise n deaths almost refusable,
as my minds mine recieve pressure the angers explosive,
spliting my personalities lik osmosis wit focus n dopeness,
now im the gyckle n hyde- a vessile of life wit heedin regrets,
cuz'im forseeing my death-even as breathe retreats from my chest
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PostSubject: Re: Honestly.. i dnt know..   Sun 09 Nov 2008, 8:55 am

I dig
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PostSubject: Re: Honestly.. i dnt know..   Sun 09 Nov 2008, 9:10 am

thank you...
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PostSubject: Re: Honestly.. i dnt know..   Mon 10 Nov 2008, 1:26 am

This a sick piece... Deep with creative wording and the flow was smooth.
No doubt an enjoyable read
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PostSubject: Re: Honestly.. i dnt know..   Mon 10 Nov 2008, 1:29 am

thanx... this gettin way better feed then i thot it was gunna get...
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PostSubject: Re: Honestly.. i dnt know..   Tue 18 Nov 2008, 5:10 am

That's deep...
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PostSubject: Re: Honestly.. i dnt know..   Tue 18 Nov 2008, 5:22 am

damn... flow was tight as fuck...
...vocab, metas, plays, creativity, emotion, consistency...

what else? multies was fire, mayng.
by far the best drop you threw at us... nice, Fam.
The depth had me like... 'whoa'.... Shocked

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rtf???
please feed- The Predecessor...
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