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PostSubject: 4 bar warning.   Sun 09 Nov 2008, 7:56 am

when reform becomes tha norm be forwarned its time for war,
out march tha first borns into the worst storm since fourty four,

no this wont be over seas theyll be fightin you and me,
please beleave and try to see theyll round us up like sheap,

as the reaper creaps this beast gets unleashed to eat its feast,
through war starvation and desease on innocent bodys it feeds,

this aint no bad dream or a false prophecy its happening as i speak,
in tha bigger skeam of things noones stoppin anything peace is outta reach,


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PostSubject: Re: 4 bar warning.   Sun 09 Nov 2008, 8:26 am

was feelin this.. short but sweet... the sheap analogy was ok, but kinda streched the line.. other then taht .. props..
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PostSubject: Re: 4 bar warning.   Sun 09 Nov 2008, 11:48 pm

Nice, mick`...

Like Kris Ko` said... yeah - I was feelin' this, too.
Got some sick conveyance in there with
vocab... that really brought this piece 2gether.

Nice werk.

...Was too short and would'uh gave more to talk about had it been longer...
But, still... I give you props on this lift you initiated.

Nice wit' it.

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