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mickey
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PostSubject: ;.]   Tue 11 Nov 2008, 5:32 am

i see it the faces of the races as he stands patient,
eyes so vacant makin his statement to the nation,
i cant take it im pacin thoughts racin to erace him,

vision of the new world order in black four door ford explorers,
now tha poor are gettin poorer battle plan includes lootin stores,

its all so bleek the holocosts repeat as the meak lie deceased,,
knee deep in poverty starved bodys heaped on piles of deceat,

only the weak will sleep shallow grave deep as the reaper creeps,
ma dont weep ima creep up tha street and get us somethin to eat,





ill get back at this.


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PostSubject: Re: ;.]   Tue 11 Nov 2008, 7:24 am

Nice shit...I like da concept "i see it the faces of the races as he stands patient,
eyes so vacant makin his statement to the nation"
Flowed smoothely but.. its like a unfinished story, it
left me wantin more
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PostSubject: Re: ;.]   Tue 11 Nov 2008, 8:50 am

thanks for tha feed,ima get back to it forshure,
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PostSubject: Re: ;.]   Tue 11 Nov 2008, 11:07 pm

flows fuckin' sick on this, mickey... serious.
Nice shit.

Man, you got props from me on this drop, but it would've been
even more impressive had you carried this for a few more bars...
Vocab was good, content was nice...
[except for that closer - but it still had it's qutalities]

felt keyed, as I read , so props on that.
Multies were tight, Fam... nice werk.

keep this creativity up, man... you showin' some
nice elevations and good grasps on what's gon' build skillage.

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PostSubject: Re: ;.]   Wed 12 Nov 2008, 1:09 am

flow was soo smooth.. decent read... i was feelin this..
props...
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