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PostSubject: i dont think they ready   Fri 14 Nov 2008, 8:57 pm

hit you in the dula with the kruger im the shooter, neva knew ya you a losa, had to bruise ya send a hollow thru ya, show up to ya crib put the pipe to ya tick, left ya brains on the bricks all scrambled and shit, you aint ready for the kid ill hang ya from a bridge, have you cryin for your kids like please let me live, wrapped up in a ditch right next to ya bitch, let me tell you what it is its nothin to the kid, im aimin for ya lips thatll make ya body flip, thatll make ya body crip thatll make ya body drip, and the beam with the grip so the gun never slip, its a guarenteed hit so ya boy cant miss
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PostSubject: Re: i dont think they ready   Sat 15 Nov 2008, 1:10 am

Nice... and welcome.

Make sure to post an Intro in the "Front Room" section of the forum.

...your drop? ...def~ got the flow down... I actually liked the scheme, too.
Not exactly basic, but you got the wording to amp up the feel of it.

Content? ...I'd read around the forums a lil'... get to know what type'uh shit's
been get'n feeds and what gets more hits and attention in terms of content.

For a showcase of flow - this was decent. Def~ got potential to toss
up some sick drops... but this specific "subject" of material ain't too
popular imo... but, aside from that... ya' vocab ain't too bad, needs some
broadening... for sure. I tried looking it up... but, what's a dula? Neutral

Anyway... yeah, make sure you elevate some 'fore you go dropping
for rankage... just a thought.

Nice showcase of flow, though... Like I said.

and... again... Welcome to HGR.

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PostSubject: Re: i dont think they ready   Sat 15 Nov 2008, 5:17 am

thats whats up tho......the flow is more of how me and my dudes get down ya know
we kinda like it fast for the most part....bein from the midwest thats how along of dudes get down....twista and bone thugs are the dudes i grew up listenin to the most....haha and the dula....madula...the dome.....guess thats just some of the slang we use round here....i appreciate the feed back tho its always welcomed.....aint nothin wrong with help gettin better ya dig......and shit thanks for welcomin me to the fam...nothin but love and you gon get some more shit......just keep the feed comin and ill tweak and twist what i can to make it more noticable
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