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badassyellowboi
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PostSubject: lock and load   Fri 14 Nov 2008, 9:13 pm

as real as the game is,you gotta keep it real to remain here,ive been in the game years,i aint gotta change shit, ive been out here gettin change with the same mothafuckas that you hang wit, i bang with the same click,but the bullets keep changin, im always keepin one in the chamba, im not the one to bang with, or throw them flames wit,the automatics will hit ya brain quick and rearrange it, i hope you recognize the danger,threw the feelings of my anger,the 40.cal is gettin rid of strangers, so dont be actin lame bra, you get caught up in the rain wit no muthafuckin umbrella to save, ive been gettin paper, runnin numbers like a pager, the dimes wanna label me a playa, they must have caught the vapors, or some kind of prejudice cause a niggas stayin sharper than a razor, still im on that G shit, and i dont care if you believe it, cause i aint tryin to keep it no secret, ive been kickin doors, layin niggas on the floor for the cheese, if its beef i wont hesitate to squeeze it, they hate me for a reason, cause its cold when im cheesin, the ice in my grill got em freezin, like winter is the season, you even look in my direction the wrong way, and ill leave a nigga bleedin, id rather be leanin, drinkin liquor and kickin it wit my niggas fuckin bitches on some freak shit, yall be on the weak shit, seein a nigga doin something he aint posed to then you go and tell police shit, thatll get ya wig split, if ya snitchin im gettin wit cha to give you a lil bit of that street shit, that creep shit, that run inside your house while you sleep shit, weak bitch gimme a answer to where the cheese is see this

i lock and load when its time to roll, i aint got no time for hoes, i will come and find ya tho, kick that in lay ya on the floo
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Kris Kokain
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PostSubject: Re: lock and load   Fri 14 Nov 2008, 11:47 pm

pretty basic flow... lik i said bout yer other shit.. more of an audio style..
.....pretty repetitive tho... so i'd clean sum of that shit up... dnt keep repeatin words to rhyme wit shit.. makes it uninteresting..
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Madeye
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PostSubject: Re: lock and load   Sat 15 Nov 2008, 1:38 am

Write what you KNOW...

Like, emotions and shit that're YOURS...
the dopest drops are spat with personal experiance in them...

Stay away from writing "generic" content...

We all think this at least once a week... ??
"What could I say that hasn't been said?" ....

well... a very particular and vivid conveyance of something
that has ONLY happened to you in the way it happened is
the first place I start to dig. Just a suggestion...

This read only got my eyes to go through the first line
and a-half of text... this content, for ANYONE to write is
very vapid and waste of flow... imo...

Normally I'm not this harsh in my feeds... aside from battling...
I'm prolly one of the most decnet feeders.

But I didn't enjoy this much.

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badassyellowboi
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PostSubject: Re: lock and load   Sat 15 Nov 2008, 5:19 am

hey keep the feed comin ya dig......open to all thoughts.....cant do nothin but help feel me.....but shit guess thats how we get down round here kris.....ill keep puttin shit up tho/........good lookin tho
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