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PostSubject: `-_ Todays Appointment _-`   Sat 15 Nov 2008, 4:13 am

Keyed - to the tilt.

There's been' times where... inside I've felt I'ma waste of skin
Call it 'nightmares'... I'll call it this place I'm livin' in...

Them minds won't Relate... my mindstate is ForBidden...
Yeah... It's the 'fruit' that killed Adam's an' Eve's ConDition

Shit... even them Doctors' scared to make an Incision...
Pay for Ignitions when they get this Timer Tickin'

Nit-Pickin' at shit they ain't lived through themselves, man
Just hand me Paxil preh'Scrbtions and say, "Get well"... Damn...

Well... I'll be damned if I'll stand to shake they hand and smile...
I've spit at they fuckin' feet an' said, "I'm gon' get high...

Wanna come out an' Puff One? - I ain't had my "Brekk-Fess"
and they end up wearin' this ?insult? like a Neck-less'...

Feel Dis-Respected, buh' I'm just an Honest Pot-Head...
An' when I'm stoned? ~ I ain't wan'in 'drop-on-spot, Dead'!

...

scratch

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PostSubject: Re: `-_ Todays Appointment _-`   Sat 15 Nov 2008, 4:36 am

There's been' times where... inside I've felt I'ma waste of skin
Call it 'nightmares'... I'll call it this place I'm livin' in...

^^cool punch OVERUSED meta but you executed it well


Them minds won't Relate... my mindstate is ForBidden...
Yeah... It's the 'fruit' that killed Adam's an' Eve's ConDition

^^ more original meta like it, oh try to avoid doing the caps stuff it messes up fluency know what im saying?


Shit... even them Doctors' scared to make an Incision...
Pay for Ignitions when they get this Timer Tickin'

I liked that worded it better and flowed on point


Nit-Pickin' at shit they ain't lived through themselves, man
Just hand me Paxil preh'Scrbtions and say, "Get well"... Damn...

Lmao i liked that so true lol and nice wording on this as well


Well... I'll be damned if I'll stand to shake they hand and smile...
I've spit at they fuckin' feet an' said, "I'm gon' get high...

^^ eh? you lost me?

Wanna come out an' Puff One? - I ain't had my "Brekk-Fess"
and they end up wearin' this ?insult? like a Neck-less'...

this was cool spelll check lol


Feel Dis-Respected, buh' I'm just an Honest Pot-Head...
An' when I'm stoned? ~ I ain't wan'in 'drop-on-spot, Dead'!

your second best bar, really just wrapped it up.


nice shit for a key madeye keep scribblen
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PostSubject: Re: `-_ Todays Appointment _-`   Sat 15 Nov 2008, 4:56 am

Thanx for the looks, Fam.

Spellcheck? ...Nah'... if you look more closely, that's a dif~ sort'uh w/play.
I could'uh said... "Like 'dem Neck-less" or sumshit... but other than that - I spelled
both ends like I did for the reader to get the annunciation... I appreciate
your concern, though. LOLz. Wink

Yeah... this morning I had an appointment with a "head" doctor... and
I didn't stand up to shake his hand when he held it out.
...and in my mind I wanted to...
[as I did to the first doc' I saw a couple weeks ago]... spit at where he stood and
tell'em to go fuck'im self, trying to hand me a prescribtion.

lmao... I asked the second doctor if he'd like to join me.
I wanna get "medicinal marijuana" if they wanna declare me
mentally unstable. lmao... yeah... I love being me.

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PostSubject: Re: `-_ Todays Appointment _-`   Sat 15 Nov 2008, 6:21 am

yah this was damn good.. for a short lil drop.. it was nice.. yah kinda fell off at the high line lol.. but none the less this shit was nice.. props Mad..
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