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PostSubject: * Stubborn Man *   Sat 25 Oct 2008, 8:44 pm

I'd never gave a fuck if I was worth shit
watchin' these lame fucks get taken by worship

But, I can face a purpose if I finds one
getn' reminded of life as my times' come

Write rhymes 'cause it's a perfect outlet For me
Thoughts combined to outline my entire story

Have the words convey what this mouth could not say
Half the verbs inlaced just empowers all wastes

Past hours remade, bring about the complex
Oust all doubts as to my call out to contest

To switch the techs, commit to lyrical wrath
puttin' thoughts on papers' a permanent task!

but, it's a curse to be had... so I'ma take it!
Create some bad ass verses ya'll relate with...

Rise up out of my past raps spat basic...
No patience, no way to lift past this thick basis...

'Find myself stressin' expression 'stead'uh Crafts...
and now keep lookin' back at them bests that I had!

I'm pissed! I'm mad! My writs ain't elevated...
forget my past, it's time to get these lyrics cerated... ~!



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PostSubject: Re: * Stubborn Man *   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 6:32 pm

liked this had a good flow to it.. lol.. i was lik readin out loud bobbin my head n ish hahaha..
reallii rockin wit it.. props on that.. basic rhyme scheam but it was good...
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PostSubject: Re: * Stubborn Man *   Tue 04 Nov 2008, 9:47 pm

Coo'...

Thanx for the looks, Fam.
Was really just tryn'uh get out some emotion and
wutnot... stay real, nah' mean?

But yeah... I appreciate the feed, Kris.

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PostSubject: Re: * Stubborn Man *   Wed 05 Nov 2008, 12:55 am

iight....

maybe it was just me but flow seem'd off imo but than again it all depends on how you read...regardless, tha piece was nice but could've used some multies and some hot punches..i was feeling tha emotion and it kinda had an eminem type attitude to it imo, maybe im wrong??
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