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PostSubject: INTRO   Mon 17 Nov 2008, 1:06 am

Verse 1:
He ain’t the hottest, but still considered somewhat an artist
But honest? He aint nothin but a smart ass pompous
Human being, who does what he can to achieve his dreams
Sure he ain’t the cream of the crop and it may seem
As if he has some less than decent genes, but he’s
Got a high self-esteem and that’s all he really needs
Satisfied with a mic in his left and a pen in his right
An outspoken individual who’s inviting and bright
Quite the Gentleman, but only on weekend and nights
All right, talkin bout the MC that u listenin to
I never make shit up, just always tellin the truth
Don’t think I’m the best, then listen and discover the proof
Cuz my lyrics will last forever like the fountain of youth
And don’t test me cuz you don’t want that kind of tension
I’ll steal Poseidon’s Triton and drown you in the third dimension
Pay attention, I heighten your senses, don’t be frightened
Give in to the music and let your mind be enlightened

Hook: (2)
GRAV on the mic DJ Ice with the instrumental
I spit flows that absorb and devour your mental
The beat is amazing, and the lyrics are influential
So listen carefully cuz you’re not on my level

Verse 2:
I’m a nice guy or at least nicer than you
Been rappin since the tenth grade, so here’s my debut
It’s been a while since then so I guess it’s long overdue
Face it I’m cruel and don’t admire the unintelligent fool
Cuz the only smart thing you spit was your wisdom tooth
I’m blessed, just admit that you’re impressed with
Me, cuz I spit aggressive music and you can’t prevent it
And you aren’t on my level my young apprentice
I’ll rip out your spleen and super glue it to your intestines
All right let’s get back to the characteristics
Listen, my skin is tan hair is brown and mind is twisted
I’m about six one, six two with a nice complexion
Nice physique and at the peak of natural selection
I strive for my art to be perfected, that’s my intention
Nowadays everything we say is filtered, it’s absurd
Fuck it; If I’m talkin to the public I’d like to be heard

Hook:Repeat
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PostSubject: Re: INTRO   Mon 17 Nov 2008, 1:14 am

cool-cool... wasn't feelin' the hook all that much...
but your content in yur verses was showin' some decent
skillage... welcome to HGR, Fam!

...quite an entrance, too. lolz.
So, thas' how you do, huh? Right down to makin' ya'self known...
Nice wit' it. Stay up and stay active... you look to have the
potential to be a force up in this bitch.

Give feeds - get feeds... ya'll know this shit.
*make sure you peep the "stickies" and see how shit's run 'round this joint, Fam.

...once again... Welcome.

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PostSubject: Re: INTRO   Mon 17 Nov 2008, 7:58 am

not bad.. vocab n shit culd be better... flow was decent, fell off here n there..
... shuld record it, it might sound better.. i was feelin this line::
Cuz the only smart thing you spit was your wisdom tooth

keep at it homie...
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PostSubject: Re: INTRO   Wed 19 Nov 2008, 7:28 am

thnx yall...ima stay active and spit da audio of this as well as other audios...
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PostSubject: Re: INTRO   Wed 19 Nov 2008, 7:52 am

sick... if yer an audio head... drop in the spit for rank seciton...
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PostSubject: Re: INTRO   Wed 19 Nov 2008, 7:58 pm

Nice... bounce
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