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Philisophical@Rappn
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PostSubject: When can i sleep?   Wed 19 Nov 2008, 10:21 am

My eyes heavy, my body draggin, these ppl moven
We all matching, no sagging, my mind im loosen
With my Ak steady, its ready, up all day long
Dreams of chevys, broken levys, no hope 2 go on
Im in this desert, mind racing, the love of my country
Im like a sheppard, up pacing, the people shun me
Of all ppl, a soldier, a fighter a got damn marine
They act like its me that made up that "Goin to Iraq" scheme
So now im wasten, im chasen, the shadows around me
Got watch from balls to four, and im still not goin to sleep
So when everybody lays dwn, and sleeps oh so comfortably
Think about this lonely soldier, gettin colder, never having ease

Kinda short but i think yall can understand
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PostSubject: Re: When can i sleep?   Wed 19 Nov 2008, 2:41 pm

yah short.. but real nice.. a nice rhyme scheme.. props on thta..
flowed real well... good shit fam..
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PostSubject: Re: When can i sleep?   Wed 19 Nov 2008, 8:27 pm

...was a nice read, fa'sho...

you lookin' like a topicalist the more I read ya ish, Fam.

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