A rap community for all skill levels.
 
FAQHomeHG Raps PortalRegisterLog inVote For Us @ Top.25

Share | 
 

 EvenOdds vs East Renegade

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
EvenOdds
Silver Artist
Silver Artist


Number of posts : 150
Age : 26
Location : Gay Strip Club
Mood : Confused about why he likes men so much
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-18

Battle Record
Wins: 1
KO Wins: 1
Losses: 1

PostSubject: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Fri 21 Nov 2008, 1:55 am

4 bars
no dickriding

Due today or tomorrow
Mostly Today
lol

Good Luck Homie
Back to top Go down
View user profile
east renegade
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 164
Age : 26
Location : east coast
Mood : alright
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-07

Battle Record
Wins: 2
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Fri 21 Nov 2008, 1:57 am

gdluck man, check
Back to top Go down
View user profile
east renegade
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 164
Age : 26
Location : east coast
Mood : alright
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-07

Battle Record
Wins: 2
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Fri 21 Nov 2008, 10:53 pm

i need a extension on the deadline, since u havent dropped yet, i'm guessing u will give it, if not take the win, but i got swaped with stuff today
Back to top Go down
View user profile
EvenOdds
Silver Artist
Silver Artist


Number of posts : 150
Age : 26
Location : Gay Strip Club
Mood : Confused about why he likes men so much
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-18

Battle Record
Wins: 1
KO Wins: 1
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sat 22 Nov 2008, 12:11 am

What Eva, i'll take the DQ
cuz i aint gunna be here for the rest of the day
Going Out Partyin'

Getting Drunk as Fuck
lol

We'll sort this out in the tourney thats coming up
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kris Kokain
Admin
Admin
avatar

Number of posts : 394
Age : 28
Location : Kingston, ON., Canada
Mood : Carnivorous
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-04

Battle Record
Wins: 3
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sat 22 Nov 2008, 12:38 am

..why dnt both of you just take an extension till tomorrow..??..
doesnt it make more sence, cuz you both need'um..
Back to top Go down
View user profile
EvenOdds
Silver Artist
Silver Artist


Number of posts : 150
Age : 26
Location : Gay Strip Club
Mood : Confused about why he likes men so much
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-18

Battle Record
Wins: 1
KO Wins: 1
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sat 22 Nov 2008, 12:41 am

Naw.. im be hung over
LOL
Back to top Go down
View user profile
east renegade
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 164
Age : 26
Location : east coast
Mood : alright
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-07

Battle Record
Wins: 2
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sat 22 Nov 2008, 2:12 pm

u have to drop first before u get the dq, so yeah the extension does make sense
Back to top Go down
View user profile
EvenOdds
Silver Artist
Silver Artist


Number of posts : 150
Age : 26
Location : Gay Strip Club
Mood : Confused about why he likes men so much
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-18

Battle Record
Wins: 1
KO Wins: 1
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sat 22 Nov 2008, 9:12 pm

Oh..k

not doing much shit now..
Head Hurts
Back to top Go down
View user profile
EvenOdds
Silver Artist
Silver Artist


Number of posts : 150
Age : 26
Location : Gay Strip Club
Mood : Confused about why he likes men so much
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-18

Battle Record
Wins: 1
KO Wins: 1
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Mon 24 Nov 2008, 12:25 am

..His Diss-Erased, Like 'Lost Females',This Herbs 'Miss'-Placed!..
..Hopin' Ya Safe, cuz Ya Image Is Better when im Breakin' Ya Face!..
..I'll Smash Him Around,Littering cuz i'll throw the Trash To the Ground!
..Leaving Em Down, like hard british workers,Cuz hes just'Receiving Pounds'!
..His 'American Dream' Of Winnin' is Dim,But i wont bother Waking Him!
..Same Crew?, fuck our 'United States',Dreams Over like the Career of Hogan!

-Finish Him-

..I'll Stand-N-Attack, Ya textin' Skills Are Lame,Seems like Hands-You-Lack,
..This Man-Is-Wack, Cuz Renegades 'Diss Ability' Shows just how bad hes Handicap!

-Done


Short Expo
Diss Ability = Disability
American Dream- Hulk Hogan from U.S
British Money- Pounds
Female- Miss
Back to top Go down
View user profile
east renegade
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 164
Age : 26
Location : east coast
Mood : alright
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-07

Battle Record
Wins: 2
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sun 30 Nov 2008, 1:50 am

i just seen this, didnt show up as new on the thread thing, is this still goin down?
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kris Kokain
Admin
Admin
avatar

Number of posts : 394
Age : 28
Location : Kingston, ON., Canada
Mood : Carnivorous
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-04

Battle Record
Wins: 3
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sun 30 Nov 2008, 2:00 am

yah.. try n drop before tomorrow nite.. if possible..
Back to top Go down
View user profile
east renegade
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 164
Age : 26
Location : east coast
Mood : alright
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-07

Battle Record
Wins: 2
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sun 30 Nov 2008, 2:03 am

ight thats gd
Back to top Go down
View user profile
east renegade
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 164
Age : 26
Location : east coast
Mood : alright
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-07

Battle Record
Wins: 2
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sun 30 Nov 2008, 3:13 am

can this kid survive this loss? cause his beleive-in god cant help his depressed writes
so i'm crucifying this cross to "even my odds"with this blessed sacrifice!!//
i'll reverse ur smug-b till ur flow hurls with stress dude cause my duty is to maul this dove till deceased
ur verse is ugly n no girl u have, so i guess its true...a beauty wont fall in love with a beast!!//
i'll leave u perplexed wit a ink stroke n hollow ur lines of the flow that u spoke
ur txt is a weak joke..so swallow my rhymes like u know how to choke!!//
twisting "e's" spine till its wrapping like a vine forming a "x" thats divine
assisting his plea lines by attacking this fool..reforming his neck with my nine//

*expo-name use to be blessed, cross=this battle
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Elementality
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 156
Age : 25
Location : South New York
Mood : Better than you skillfully - but always angry.
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-03

Battle Record
Wins: 2
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Sun 30 Nov 2008, 9:05 pm

Um... This was a pretty weak battle in my opinion.

Flow - pretty close but i think that EvenOdds got it cuz at times East Ren's bars needed to be reworded.
Multies - East Ren got this. He had a lot more.
Punches - I wasn't feeling most punches on either side. I liked 2 bars from EvenOdds. The Receiving Pounds one was iight. And the last one was good. As for East Ren i liked your last two. But I think EvenOdds got the better punch barely.
Nameplay - Evenodds didn't even mention Ren. Ren had a lil. So Ren got this one.
Wordplay - Easy stuff. EvenOdds takes it.
Complexity - Tough call. But I gotta go with East Ren.
Consistency - I think this is easy cuz it seems to me that EvenOdds forced the Hogan line. It coulda been worded better. East Ren was a lot more consitent.

Vote - Close Battle. But I think East Ren just won this
Back to top Go down
View user profile
east renegade
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 164
Age : 26
Location : east coast
Mood : alright
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-11-07

Battle Record
Wins: 2
KO Wins: 2
Losses: 1

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Mon 01 Dec 2008, 12:25 am

thanks for the vote man 1-0
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Tha Kid
Admin
Admin


Number of posts : 264
Age : 36
Location : New York
Mood : Hungry
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-10-28

Battle Record
Wins: 1
KO Wins: 1
Losses: 2

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Mon 01 Dec 2008, 1:51 am

Flow - EO
Multies - ER
Punches - ER
Nameplay - ER
Wordplay - EO
Complexity - ER
Consistency - ER
Structure - EO

ER = 5/8 EO = 3/8

ER took this imo, EO's verse didnt seem too hard n it kinda seemed like he rushed through writing it...ER ur punches n multies were hot but (im surprised im saying this) there were too many rhymes lol it seemed like u were just tryna see how many multies u could jam into a bar lol and it fucked with your structure alot and made tha flow choppy to me

Anyways MVGT: ER

2 Votes For ER
0 Votes For EO
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Goku.
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 36
Age : 30
Location : South.
Mood : Im Straight Cuz.
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-12-02

Battle Record
Wins: 0
KO Wins: 0
Losses: 0

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Tue 02 Dec 2008, 8:34 pm

Opener: Tie, i couldnt decide which was better, both had weak points on openers
Punches: Tie, neither had a standout punch in this battle.
Personals: East, had a nameplay personal
Complexity: Tie, nothin complex here, only simple punches an concepts
Flow: Evenodss, much easier to read, with a coo structure
Consistency: Tie, both were solid okish material throughout
WP/NP: East...blah
Closer: Tie, Gunplay is blah, but evenodds didnt do to well with his punch either.

Winner: East renegade..A Battle is won with punches an personals, seein as ER had 1 personal he edged this battle, were as both cancelled each other with weak punches here.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Goku.
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Number of posts : 36
Age : 30
Location : South.
Mood : Im Straight Cuz.
Points : 0
Registration date : 2008-12-02

Battle Record
Wins: 0
KO Wins: 0
Losses: 0

PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   Tue 02 Dec 2008, 9:20 pm

East Renegadge Wins 3-0.
Good Battle.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: EvenOdds vs East Renegade   

Back to top Go down
 
EvenOdds vs East Renegade
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Rodigan & Luv injection v Matterhorn & Mighty Crown: Stratford, East London. 2006
» 1985.07.04 - Madame Wong's East, Los Angeles, USA
» TT places in the East & North East
» Action House, Electric Circus, Ritz Theatre - Sep/Oct 1970
» 1988.08.16 - Giants Stadium, East Rutherford, USA

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Homegrown Raps :: ~ Text'cee Forum ~ :: Text'cee Battle Grounds :: Text Battle Archives-
Jump to: