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Philisophical@Rappn
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PostSubject: The Crown   Sat 29 Nov 2008, 7:29 am

Ima gone ahead and say my part and ima leave it at this
Most rappers get ranked lightweight, leave the site cuz they pissed
But all lightweight means, u can elevate clown
Thats why ima sayin, i hold the lightweight crown
They worthless, with no purpose so they actin mad
With a one word trick, i hurt chicks, im maken'em sad
Now my creativity is out there, im puttin in work
U say your peace, i reverse, straight flip it and curse
I know im not the best on the site, but see thats okay
With positive feed, negative feed, elevate anyway
With no compitition,Im finished, i'll sit back on my thrown
And when u ready to be proud, This lightweight'll throw u a bone

Theres always room for improvement cheers
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Kris Kokain
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PostSubject: Re: The Crown   Sat 29 Nov 2008, 9:15 am

U say your peace, i reverse, straight flip it and curse
^^that line flowed real good.. props on the piece, tru.. every1 can elevate...
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PostSubject: Re: The Crown   Sat 29 Nov 2008, 11:46 pm

Decent... I liked this, Fam...
Shows a wise and "stay-real" mindframe about you...

...which is a valuable attribute, imo...
Stick that shit out, Fam... fah'real.

I figure that it's CONTENT that should recieve the most attention
when any writer sits and delves into their worlds inside them...
...all lyricism-tactics and wordy cleverness with such, should be secondary.

You've got some real key ingredients in you to
do impressive things ... lyrically... I think - in my own opinion.

"...become it... don't go through trying to BUILD it..."
... is all that I can offer, really.

Got some good qualities among those that need werk.

Stay up and with this...

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