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Philisophical@Rappn
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PostSubject: Emotions of A Rapper   Mon 01 Dec 2008, 4:27 am

Skulls burst open, flow of words are so lethal
Doords open to hell, nigga fuck your regal
Spitten with a venom, of rays, words illegal
Professionally battle with niggas, i will teach u
And half way out ya mind, my words will meet u
Sporactic, Ashmatic, It will knock ya teeth through
Up in smoke disappear, rap does not even need u
Wat the fuck are u ryhming for, i rock these ppl
Scramble ya brains all in ya head, call it meat juice
Call me a magicitician, u disappear so say poof
Bullet proof ryhmes, battle me if u feelin lucky
Kick ya ass of the line like that broke dwn bitch buffy
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PostSubject: Re: Emotions of A Rapper   Mon 01 Dec 2008, 4:44 am

lmao...

haha... illy delivery of this rhyme, overall.
Though... from the title, I was expecting some in-depth
script of how/what the emotions are...

but nice flow and vocab, fa'sho.
...favorite line:
Quote :
Call me a magicitician, u disappear so say poof

...that was nicely put, Fam.
Entertaining on a couple dif~ levels.

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PostSubject: Re: Emotions of A Rapper   Mon 01 Dec 2008, 10:34 pm

Thanx for the feed man, i was tryin to keep it sweet and short
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PostSubject: Re: Emotions of A Rapper   Tue 02 Dec 2008, 11:22 am

good flow.. decent read.. keep at it..
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PostSubject: Re: Emotions of A Rapper   Sat 06 Dec 2008, 9:26 pm

co-sign wit wat both these niggas said except like i said before, some multies would really make ur verses better IMO
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