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 Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]

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PostSubject: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Fri 05 Dec 2008, 9:01 pm

you know the deal...

4 bars.
due in 24 hrs after check ins.


G'luck to ya' both.
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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Fri 05 Dec 2008, 10:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Sat 06 Dec 2008, 1:28 am

Damn... i gotta face you!? Sad ...
G'Luck man. - Round II for us.

MIC CHEQUE.
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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Sun 07 Dec 2008, 7:17 am

My bad for being late...

Why bother to drop ya verse, I already clinched first, while you on ya purse
You a second hand hoe like the game once was a Dr’s bitch, call this dude a nurse

Dr Dre & The Game. The Game was Dre’s bitch sorta.

Renegade is played yet he is paid, holding corners down with a block-aid smaller then a brigade in a palisade
But Mentality invades, then acid is sprayed giving him golden showers like I’m spitting lemonade

Hit ya so you’re bones crunch, fists come in a bunch for Ren so watch it hunch-ER
Couldn’t finish me like his lunch, not even clipping papers if he were a ‘whole puncher’

Hole puncher

And the fall of the East... CHINA! you'll get it if you know bout China back when.

Draggin’ fists and the belly of the beast, and you’re least at an OPEN DOOR POLICY for the wake released as a nations feast
Have the East deceased, watch countries RIP N CROSS your ‘heads-tone’ pieced like China’s funeral with foreign priests!

Draggin’ (Dragon)
Head stone (for a burial)
Rip n cross (R.I.P and Cross religious)
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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Sun 07 Dec 2008, 2:38 pm

doseing with water to turn this ELement of fire out
my posts will slaughter n return another "L" to him witout a dire doubt//
slashing his head off to leave him de-cap-it-ated n in el-mental ward
smashing this thread to achieve my key-raps-hit n sedate to impel a detrimental record//
say a hail mary cause your owned like rule since ur from new york
slayin this frail fairy till I atone this fool with only a few torques//
on ur knees so u descend like ur skills are remote to beat me cause no one beleives-in weak... prey thats deceased easy
this kid wont be "cheesein" at the end cause i'm killing this goat just to eat E and i'm not even greek to say the least B//


*give him another L, cause i beat him once
*el means the in spanish
*ja rule got owned by em, in ems version of hail mary, em is rapping over tupacs hail mary beat owning ja who made that new york song n plus el is from new york too
*torque is a noun: a twisting force
*feta cheese is made from goats milk n is greek

dont get anythin, ask

n gdluck el
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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Sun 07 Dec 2008, 4:08 pm

Elem..
Why bother to drop ya verse, I already clinched first, while you on ya purse
You a second hand hoe like the game once was a Dr’s bitch, call this dude a nurse

^^flow was aight, concept is kinda forced.. i see it, but it lacks delivery.. multies in it miss-matched

Renegade is played yet he is paid, holding corners down with a block-aid smaller then a brigade in a palisade
But Mentality invades, then acid is sprayed giving him golden showers like I’m spitting lemonade

^^blah.. no real punch here.. flow was kinda streched.. no multies..

Hit ya so you’re bones crunch, fists come in a bunch for Ren so watch it hunch-ER
Couldn’t finish me like his lunch, not even clipping papers if he were a ‘whole puncher’

^^i see this concept, but it aint really hittin'.. no multies.. flow is good..

Draggin’ fists and the belly of the beast, and you’re least at an OPEN DOOR POLICY for the wake released as a nations feast
Have the East deceased, watch countries RIP N CROSS your ‘heads-tone’ pieced like China’s funeral with foreign priests!

^^i see where you tryin to complex yer shit, but yer tryin too hard.. puttin to much.. if you wana make it mo' complex.. make yer set-up yer first line, so it shortens yer bars n doesnt sacrifice the flow n concept.. no real multies, flow was streched..


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doseing with water to turn this ELement of fire out
my posts will slaughter n return another "L" to him witout a dire doubt//

^^nice lil person.. nuttin hittin too hard, but its there, flow was good, multies were basic but effecitve, good internals..

slashing his head off to leave him de-cap-it-ated n in el-mental ward
smashing this thread to achieve my key-raps-hit n sedate to impel a detrimental record//

^^not feelin this.. multies forced.. flow was ok.. no real punch here..

say a hail mary cause your owned like rule since ur from new york
slayin this frail fairy till I atone this fool with only a few torques//

^^blah.. the set-up was better then the finsiher.. shuld always finish strong wit bars.. multies were good, same wit flow..

on ur knees so u descend like ur skills are remote to beat me cause no one beleives-in weak... prey thats deceased easy
this kid wont be "cheesein" at the end cause i'm killing this goat just to eat E and i'm not even greek to say the least B//

^^flow was mad streched, concept was there, but wasnt delivered.. multies were ok..

flow- ren
multies- ren
punches- ren
delivery- tie
sims- neither
structure- tie.. both either fell off, er werent doin it
complexity- El
consistency- ren

Ren GMV..
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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Sun 07 Dec 2008, 8:18 pm

thanks for the vote, 1-0
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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Thu 18 Dec 2008, 10:17 pm

flow- ren
multies- ren
punches- ren
delivery- tie
sims- neither
structure- ele
complexity- El
consistency- ren

vote~east renegade
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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Sun 11 Jan 2009, 2:54 pm

thanks for the vote, uppin for the last vote for the KO if this is still goin on, wen this site gets active again
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PostSubject: Re: Elementality {Vs.} east renegade [Semi Finals]   Mon 12 Jan 2009, 11:21 pm

...the Tourney's more or less been X'd.

But I'll drop a vote on this soon.
Sorry it all ended this way, Famz.

Stay up!


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