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PostSubject: mickeys scrap versus.   Tue 09 Dec 2008, 5:04 pm

i needed a place to put this stuff.
im sick of eracing shit i dont post so ima put it here.
if you dont got nothin nice to say about it fuck off its my scraps.



im back after another incarceration,
so simply mickey has been patiently waitin,
taken shifty statements from wasted vagrants,
breakin araignments as the bodys grow fragrant,
makin arangements so tha popo find my home vacant,



its hard out here for a mick, had ta stick tha ice pick in a snitches chick,
i got scars out here from this,fuckers flick shit and wind up with a split lip,

..............................................................................................................

ill have ya fartin semin after one night of drinkin,
butthole bleedin as im leavin thinkin "whats stinkin".

i pack bodys in the back of the lincoln,
i slap hotties with my sack for speakin,

ill turn a nice chick to a dick gripper,
my ice pick is a nice fit in your ventriculur,{not sure how to spell that but its a valve in a heart}

,,,
the truth's tied in new lies i flip scripts like true lies,
a demon with blue eyes whos got the nuse tied to tight,

...............................

the revolution will be televised,
so the masses can be well advised,
the governments been tellin lies,

theyll take away your amendment rights,
so when you own a gun your condemned to die,
.........................
chaos is is callin i feel like stallin but brawlin, {general stallin}
my lines are fallin i got nothin but im callin all in,

if i die here this day i pray i get an hour in heaven before the devil takes me away,
if i fight and clear my prey i may just learn a lesson in horror from the rebels i slay,


Last edited by mickey on Thu 29 Jan 2009, 8:34 am; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : added more scraps)
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PostSubject: Re: mickeys scrap versus.   Wed 10 Dec 2008, 1:38 pm

flow nice, too short..
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PostSubject: Re: mickeys scrap versus.   Thu 29 Jan 2009, 8:35 am

uppin for feed.
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PostSubject: Re: mickeys scrap versus.   Fri 30 Jan 2009, 12:18 am

...hmmm...

Had some clever rhymes in there...
content was shotty... not really on one level or thought...
but all├Ęs good with the flow, easy.

Vocabs decent... rhyme scheme couldve been held for more than a couple bars - at best.
...try keeping a single emotion or feeling isolated to write from.

Overall though... this was good on a couple different levels...
I believe you could out weight this here, though...

Ive seen some nice pieces from you... and good looks on the length...
usually your quite brief... so, I enjoyed this read.

Nice, Fam.

One =1
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PostSubject: Re: mickeys scrap versus.   Sat 31 Jan 2009, 5:43 am

ha! i know mad... these are all scrap verses from whatever i was doin on different days i appreciate the feed though.
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